I watched a few more episodes of Trouble Chocolate today... hilarious stuff, truly. The translators went for language-based humor over authenticism, which is unfortunate, but I can't complain too much because it works. I will have to rewatch the sixth episode, though, and try to catch the Japanese puns. They're CLOSE to the translations given, but obviously different. Then I finally got to work cleaning up that contest chapter, and I'm more than halfway through now, although I'm hoping to expand this scene a bit because I feel like I really rushed it the first time. Less than a month left before the deadline, but I'm not concerned. As always, I'll have a great chapter ready in time, and I have my eye on one of those prizes... looking forward to it. Even if I don't win, it's more exposure for an original story. That can't be bad.
Cacao used the Cat-Fist! Counter with BOOBIES OF POWER! (Hey, it's better than those crappy puns.)